Sunday, July 5, 2009

Chicken Fight

Bodies in Water
Too close, too close
Despair and Sadness

6 comments:

Joel and Leslie said...

Ahhh, the return of the limerick. I love it. Leslie

Jenn said...

I was actually going for a Haiku. I am not much of a poet.
Jed

Joel and Leslie said...

OR I just forgot the difference. We'll just call it a poem. =)
Leslie

The Ray said...

Haiku....

5 syllables
7syllables
5 syllables.

you were close. almost as close as your body was to mine in the pool. too close, too close!

Amen!

Jed said...

Techincally it is not syllables, but "on" which is a Japanese term which is similar to syllable. After I read that on wikipedia I decided that screw it I will write as I wish.

Shorty said...

I think that was actually, a little too much information! Not a pretty mental picture.